pleas edit and improve my paper to make it A paper. use the manuscrbit that i attached and the following Comments 1. After reading your introduction, I still need answers to the following questions:
1) Why is it important to study your topic;
2) Who has studied your topic before?
3) What do we know about your topic?
4) What gaps exist in the literature that you hope to address? In other words, what is your core, overarching research question?
5) Why should we care about this gap/question? Why is it important to begin to address and close this gap/answer this question?
2. You do not spend any time explaining the relationship between the variables. The majority of this paper talks about congruity theory. Where has research been conducted on the variables of interest? Why do you believe that there exists a relationship between the variables hypothesized? What does the literature tell you about possible previous links?
3. You explain the theory and talk about it but you do not use the theory to explain the possible relationships.
4. There is certain information that you must be included when explaining your measures: who created the scale, the number of questions, how it will be measured (., Likert scale), an example question, the directions that respondents are told when they fill out the survey. Look at INSS articles to see a good example. and i do not know how many pages you will need to improve the paper.
