My social media marketing project needs editing. Majority of paper is good just needs a few thing added and edited.
Can you please explain to me the following:
Why did you not reference either of the 2 companies websites. It appears all information was gained from other sources. The guideline specifically says to reference the companies’ websites.
Where are the screen shots or data to support your statements? You don’t support your statements and many of the quotes you provide are opinion and non-specific.
Required info needed is missing. For example:
Missing Data on number of followers.
Missing list all the SMM platforms the companies use.
Specific demographic data like Baby Boomers, Gen Z etc. .
Missing screen shots to support data
Missing links to companies websites and explanation of what they do
Did you go to the companies’ SM sites to learn what they are doing? You haven’t listed them in your resource page. All the resources you did use where flagged by Turnitin.
I am giving you the opportunity to re-do your project to meet the guideline. Read the guideline in its entirety. Make sure you include the items I noted above along with any others you see you didn’t include. Loose the academic speak, write in your own voice. Think: They said on their site…, they did…, they showed…. Use bullet points as they will help you stick to factual representations.
