FORMAT: *student note:
this is a revision for my final you can add up to 1page or more for editing to answer teacher questions. this is due may 5th at 8pm thank you
*teachers note:
Widdienne – thanks for sharing. This is well written and well-reasoned, and you’ve demonstrated a sophisticated understanding of “The Red Convertible.” If you choose to revise this for the final, I would encourage you to spend a bit more time analyzing the fight between Henry and Lyman at the river and the events leading up to it. The following – “As I watched it I felt something squeezing inside me and tightening and trying to let go all at the same time” – marks a crucial turning point in the story and I think it deserves some airtime, especially in an essay as strong as this one. I feel similarly about the photo passage on p 11. Pay close attention to the way Henry and Lyman arrange themselves around the car. Do you notice anything about their body language? Why do you think the photograph haunts Lyman? Thanks again for sharing. Excellent work.
In addition to your final, please write a paragraph in which you describe your revision process. This paragraph is mandatory – I will deduct points if it is not included. Specificity is highly encouraged.
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PREVIOUS PAPER INSTRUCTIONS (#568620983): I understand it is alot of attachment file. i wanted to attach them so that you could have several options to choose from especiealy if you may have read some of them in the past.
