Chapter 1:Introduction
You need to clearly write about the Research Problem (Problem Statement) this could be after the introduction and before Aim and objectives. Also, the significance of the study. 250 words
• 1.6 Originality: you need to elaborate further. You can add something like that, “To the best of our knowledge, this study is the first of its type to examine the relationship between ….. 600 words
• Your argument that this research is original just because of using primary data is not valid. Chapter 2: Literature Review The chapter reviewed extensive literature but you need to review the studies that examined the relationship between leadership style and employee agility indicating where these studies were conducted and what methodology they used and the results they obtained. – 1000 words Chapter 3: Methodology
• You need to follow consistent referencing style. In many cases, you did not mention the vol., issue and page numbers of the publication. THE WHOLE REFERENCE LIST NEEDS TO BE EDITED, EVEN THE NEW REFERENCES THAT YOU WILL ADD!! THE REFERENCES HAVE TO BE 2018 AND ABOVE, AS LATEST AS POSSIBLE, FROM Q1 AND Q2 JOURNALS ONLY!! • The report requires further editing and proofreading. • it needs improvement especially the introduction and the methodology sections. I NEED ALL THE REFERENCES (OLD AND NEW) IN HARVARD BUSINESS STYLE (BRITISH) where you need to mention all the vol. numbers, issues numbers, page numbers etc. highlight in “yellow” everything that he/she will be editing or adding.
