https://cinema.usc.edu/producing/index.cfm? Take a look at the program website and rewrite the essay to a completed and compelling essay(combine everything into one essay, word count: between 142 words and 250 words
answer:
3. What is your plan for the next year if you are not accepted into the Peter Stark Producing Program? (1,000 characters maximum)
4. Do you have an ultimate career goal? If so, what is it? (1,000 characters maximum)
AVOID WORD REPETITION -One thing that can wreck the STYLE of any answer is the repeated use of the same word, or even a variation on that word, especially in the same sentence, when that repetition is not done intentionally or for effect. CREATE WORD PICTURES -That means using evocative word choices (use action verbs, use illustrative adjectives). Write in a way that paints a picture in the reader’s mind in such a way that would compel someone to engage in the story.