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TEEEL Paragraph Essay Planner
Introduction
Outline
Your Essay
· What is WW1?
· When did it occur?
· In 1-2 sentences, state whether you think “War is
Hell”.
World War 1 was a worldwide war that took place
mainly in Europe and the Middle East from 1914 to 1918. The assassination of
Austrian Archduke Franz Ferdinand on 28 June 1914 triggered a series of
events that led to the war in early August 1914. War is hell because of the
extensive suffering, destruction, and loss it causes to people and
communities.
Introduction
– How the War Started | Canada and the First World War 2024, Canada and the
First World War, viewed 6 June 2024, .
World
War I | History, Summary, Causes, Combatants, Casualties, Map, & Facts |
Britannica 2024, Encyclopædia
Britannica, viewed 12 June 2024,
.
Paragraph 1 – This
should be your strongest argument
TEEL Structure:
Your write goes here:
(you only need 1-2 sentences per box)
T – Topic Sentence:
What is the main idea you will be discussing in your
paragraph?
Do you agree or disagree with the statement above?
The Gallipoli campaign supports the argument that
war is hell for many reasons, including the high death toll and severe
suffering it caused.
E – Explain:
Why do you agree or disagree with the statement
above?
I agree with the statement that war is hell, as evidenced
by the Gallipoli campaign.
E – Example:
Conduct some of your own research to evidence for
your argument.
What is this evidence?
According to the Australian War Memorial, during the
eight-month Gallipoli campaign, over 8,700 Australian soldiers were killed,
and over 19,000 were wounded. In total more than 130,000 men had died during
the campaign.
What do you
think that would have done to the people at home?
After 4 months the battles became stalemate
The Gallipoli campaign’s high death toll and severe
injuries reflect the brutal reality of war. Soldiers experienced constant
attack, disease, and extreme weather conditions during the war.
…because of these reasons death was high…
E – Elaborate:
Elaborate on the evidence you discussed.
Why does this support the argument you are making?
This suffering emphasizes the devastating impact of
warfare on individuals and communities.
L – Link:
Summarise what you have said.
Link it back to the question.
For these reasons, the Gallipoli campaign is one of
the most recognized and significant military wars leaving a lasting impact on
not only the soldiers but also Australia.
Paragraph 2 – This
should be your second argument
TEEL Structure:
Your write goes here:
(you only need 1-2 sentence per box)
T – Topic Sentence:
What is the main idea you will be discussing in your
paragraph?
Do you agree or disagree with the statement above?
Natures of warfare
E – Explain:
Why do you agree or disagree with the statement
above?
E – Example:
Conduct some of your own research to evidence for
your argument.
What is this evidence?
The main military technology and weapons that were
used by the troops in the Battle of Gallipoli were rifles, revolvers, machine
guns, hand grenades, shelling, artillery, battleships, gas, and trenches.
because of the continuous fighting, enormous death
toll, and severe suffering for soldiers, war was destructive and devastating.
E – Elaborate:
Elaborate on the evidence you discussed.
Why does this support the argument you are making?
L – Link:
Summarise what you have said.
Link it back to the question.
Paragraph 3 – Your
counter argument
(Remember that in History,
there is no right answer. Mak sure you show that you understand things are
complex by discuss the other side of the argument.)
TEEL Structure:
Your write goes here:
(you only need 1-2 sentence per box)
T – Topic Sentence:
What is the main idea you will be discussing in your
paragraph?
Do you agree or disagree with the statement above?
Advancement of Technology
Transportation
Medicine
Weapons
communication
E – Explain:
Why do you agree or disagree with the statement
above?
E – Example:
Conduct some of your own research to evidence for
your argument.
What is this evidence?
E – Elaborate:
Elaborate on the evidence you discussed.
Why does this support the argument you are making?
L – Link:
Summarise what you have said.
Link it back to the question.
Conclusion
Outline
Your Essay
· In 1 for each, summarise the main points for each
paragraph.
· Re-state your stance on “War is Hell.”
Bibliography
(You should have 3-5
PROPERLY REFERENCED sources here. Each of these sources should have been
included within your essay.)
