The research paper is almost completed and written, just need some editing. It’s also only missing table on contents, abstract, and methodology section. Therefore, I just need
a bit of editing with
feedback I will attached and will also need the other sections that are
missing.
I have also attached an example of how it’s
supposed to look like. As well as the instructions.
This is the feedback for the paper thats
alredy written which I will attached.
“Your RQs look good to me. Your H! essentially poses the
same questions you asked in RQ 1 and 2, so you can remove it.
Try a different and more substantive title. You
could have discussed some more background information and key literature in
your Introduction. Because Tik Tok is new, you could have discussed different
types of advertisements within this platform. Because you have focused on Tik
Tok algorithms, you could have explained how it is different from other social
media platforms. You have repeated yourself—see whether you can reduce that.
Add more literature. Before discussing the Uses and Gratifications theory, show
relevance and provide context. You need to explain the theory more. I did not
see the relevance of this theory to your research. Later, when you put your
research questions, you referenced users’ motivation. You could have provided
additional context and relevance by providing more details of the uses and
gratifications theory. Some of your paragraphs are too short—see how you
combine thematically similar paragraphs. Delete the extra spaces in between
paragraphs.”
