The grade was 30/100 and I need 40/100 in order to pass.
The feedback from my tutor is the following:
I hope this feedback finds you well. Before I begin providing details on your work, I will let you know that the mark you see on your screen is provisional. This means that this is not your final mark, and it may alter. Your final grade will be known to you after the moderation procedure and the academic board, when you will be able to download all your marks from UDO.
For the coursework, you were required to apply psychological theory and empirical research findings to critically discuss how the selected challenge/issue has been, and should/could be, understood and addressed. The coursework assessed the following learning outcomes: 1. Apply psychological theory, methods, and research findings to education, 2. Develop evidence-based strategies to improve learning and teaching.
Overall, this was a very poor attempt. You haven`t identified a suitable issue to be addressed. Unfortunately, you were off topic. You should have discussed issues with assessment and identification in children with ASD. What are the challenges in diagnosis and what strategies can be implemented in order to manage those issues and have a more effective diagnostic process? Finally, please follow the suggested formatting for this report, as presented in the assessment brief.
For more details, I provide below comments and feedback for each section respectively, as well as a few words regarding the overall strengths and weakness of your work. You may also check the comments on the original text.
Description and discussion of the issue/challenge: You didn`t manage to set the context for the report and describe the selected issue/challenge in a satisfactory way. You were off topic. Addressing the issue/challenge: You didn`t manage to discuss practical strategies that have been proposed and/or tested to address the selected issue/challenge.
Recommendations: You haven`t included recommendations for addressing the issue. Regarding directions for future research, these were also missing.
Please use this feedback to reflect on. Keep the strengths for the upcoming related submissions and make a plan to work on the weaknesses in order to increase your skills and marks. In case you have any question/s regarding the present feedback you can contact me through an email, and we can arrange a meeting during my office hours.
