The file for my dissertation has notes attached from my tutor and I will send you the link for each video were he explains what each note means. I havre also provided you with a template he gave me for the results section.
He does say most of the information in the result section is not needed and a lot of it can go into the methods section, but just go through the videos and notes and do what you think is best and what will make more sense from a university professors point of view.
Only about half the dissertation actually needs editing so I have placed the order with 11 pages (half the word count), as most of it can be used. After changes are made please ensure the word count still meets at least 5800, excluding reference list and tables.
Please go through all videos:
1 – https://ljmu.cloud.panopto.eu/Panopto/Pages/Viewer.aspx?id=bea26f26-b0a1-4579-931a-b10300f1e677
2 – https://ljmu.cloud.panopto.eu/Panopto/Pages/Viewer.aspx?id=762d52df-1e60-48a8-91b1-b10300f52f2f
3 – https://ljmu.cloud.panopto.eu/Panopto/Pages/Viewer.aspx?id=a749492a-1c2c-4c4f-905b-b10300fa0f8b
4 – https://ljmu.cloud.panopto.eu/Panopto/Pages/Viewer.aspx?id=89806d86-945e-4fec-93f3-b10300fb7cec
5 – https://ljmu.cloud.panopto.eu/Panopto/Pages/Viewer.aspx?id=6d4f86ce-1bb5-4228-ab04-b10300fdb4b9
the deadline for this is the 26th.