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1. In Sherman Alexie’s “What You Pawn I Will Redeem,” alcohol is a significant obstacle for Jackson Jackson. His drinking habits waste his money, impair his judgment, and derail his efforts to reclaim his grandmother’s regalia. Every time he drinks, he falls further from his goal, showing how alcohol can trap someone in a cycle of poverty and poor decisions. In real life, I’ve seen alcohol wreak similar havoc. It can lead to health issues, job loss, and broken relationships. People get so caught up in drinking that they neglect important parts of their lives, just like Jackson does.
2. Despite his flaws, Jackson Jackson has admirable qualities. He’s persistent, kind, and funny. He tries to buy back his grandmother’s regalia with his money, showing his sense of fairness. He’s also generous, often sharing what little he has with others, like when he buys drinks for everyone at the bar. While his lack of self-control and tendency to waste money can be frustrating, his good intentions and kind heart make him relatable and likable.
