‘Psychiatric” is not the right adjective to use here because it is not related to psychiatry. Page 2 Be more specific than just saying “general language growth” for clarity. Page 2 “Making gestures” is not the right expression to describe the phenomenon. Find a better phrase. Page 3 1) You need to rewrite the entire abstract because right now it reads like an introduction. An abstract should be a summary of the most important points of your own paper. Most of what you have in your current abstract belongs in the “Theoretical and Research Basis for Treatment” section. 2) Try to proofread your work more carefully and be more selective about word choice. I have corrected a few errors toward the beginning, but go over the rest and fix whatever else needs fixing. Make sure that every word expresses what you really want to say. If you ever feel unsure, look it up online or/and find a synonym.
