Revise the draft you wrote in Topic 2, utilizing the feedback from your peer review. Complete your revision in conjunction with the guidelines for the first draft assignment given in Topic 2.
This assignment uses a rubric. Please review the rubric prior to beginning the assignment to become familiar with the expectations for successful completion.
Prepare this assignment according to the guidelines found in the APA Style Guide, located in the Student Success Center.
You are required to submit this assignment to LopesWrite. A link to the LopesWrite technical support articles is located in Class Resources if you need assistance.
Below i attached the peer review rough draft and the peer review worksheet that graded my rough draft.
Your draft is in good shape. Here are some suggestions based on the rubrics:
Content and Ideas
If you’re putting your evidence in order of importance, what would come last? What’s the best closer for your argument?
Organization
It’s best that the thesis states the claim and 3 points–see announcement.
Make the thesis the last sentence of the first paragraph.
Make sure the body paragraphs follow the order set up by the list of 3 points in the thesis.
Try breaking this up into shorter, better-structured PEEL paragraphs.
Make the first sentence of your conclusion paragraph a recap of the thesis so the reader knows exactly what was covered.
Format
Your format is indented and double-spaced. The margins are 1″ all around. Good job!
Style
Readers like a conversational, concise style.
