Research Paper #2 is a resubmission of Paper #1, with two main components that you will be evaluated on.
First, you must go through and edit/revise your paper with an eye for fixing the issues I highlight in my comments and that you notice now that you have a second chance to look at your previous work. You may change as much or as little of your paper as you choose, but know that a portion of this resubmission will be evaluated based on the improvements you have made from your first submission. Improvements can consist of simple fixes to language, grammar, punctuation, format, etc., as well as larger issues like structure, argumentation, organization, evidence, and supporting commentary. Even if you received an A on your original submission, take some time to ensure that your writing is as flawless as possible before resubmitting.
Second, you must find and include (2) additional secondary sources in this submission in your second draft/submission. This step allows you to add in work and argumentation that you might now have had time for or the comprehension to include in the first draft, or perhaps to shore up a point or two that was a bit thin in the first submission. There are a few good ways to incorporate these new sources, ranging from simply adding more content to the argument you are already making to providing alternative approaches that you might not have had time to include, to introducing oppositional views on the ideas you have provided from the first submission. Whichever path you choose, please be sure to make the inclusion of these new sources as seamless as possible- your essay should not feel like two paragraphs have been stuck on the end, for example, but rather than these sources were a part of the paper from the start.
