Red writing contains information that needs to be fixed. The red information highlighted in yellow contains information I have adjusted
Feedback on Your Topic Proposal: Information that can be added to fix sections that are not approved.
Clarity and Focus: Approved. This topic is very applicable right now. Focus on violence against the staff not the patients (That would be a whole other topic). Specify what type of psych unit.
Relevance and Significance: Approved
Objectives and Goals: See our comments in attachment.
Methodology: Your proposal would benefit from a clearer definition of the specific type of quantitative design you plan to use (e.g., descriptive, experimental, quasi-experimental). Clarifying this will help in aligning your methodology with your research questions and objectives. Your data collection methods are not mentioned, and more detail is needed. Describe the tools or instruments you will use to collect data (e.g., surveys, questionnaires, interviews). Ensure you explain why these tools are appropriate for your study and how you will ensure their reliability and validity. The criteria for selecting your sample need more detail. Please specify the inclusion and exclusion criteria for your study participants. Additionally, provide a justification for your chosen sample size and explain how you plan to achieve it (e.g., random sampling, convenience sampling).
Literature Review: Approved
