My instructor is very strict . I already write my papers but ive got zero to it, please rewrite it .
answer these questions very specifically:
What did the authors study?
How did they study it? Or, what did they do?
What did they find? A lot of your studies measure multiple
things, but you can choose a statistic or an example or an experiment that you
thought was meaningful.
What did they conclude? Did the recommend more research?
Did they recommend a solution?
Proofreading References:
Pull up your example and reference side-by-side.
What’s abbreviated? What’s capitalized? What italicized?
I have attacched the my papers has a comments from my instructor. Please answer the specific question below.
TITLE : THE HUMAN IMPACT OF WILDFIRES
PLAGIARISM IS PROHIBITED , AUTOMATIC ZERO
Focus on your annotations and correct your references.
You should just have your references and about a paragraph or two as an annotation for the annotated bibliography.
You, will focus on content over length.
Be specific, precise, and choose relevant details and connections. Ask yourself, will the reader understand the gist of this article and why I chose it?
Here are the 6 sources …. Please arrage and correct the sources accordingly
1. Ip, A. (2013). Methodology to Assess Forest Fire Impacts on Air Quality and Human Health in Washington State: A Case Study on the 2006 Tripod Wildfires (Doctoral dissertation).
2. Palaiologou, P., Kalabokidis, K., Ager, A. A., & Day, M. A. (2020). Development of comprehensive fuel management strategies for reducing wildfire risk in Greece. Forests, 11(8), 789.
3. Bowman, D. M., Williamson, G. J., Abatzoglou, J. T., Kolden, C. A., Cochrane, M. A., & Smith, A. M. (2017). Human exposure and sensitivity to globally extreme wildfire events. Nature ecology & evolution, 1(3), 0058.
4. To, P., Eboreime, E., & Agyapong, V. I. (2021). The impact of wildfires on mental health: a scoping review. Behavioral Sciences, 11(9), 126.
5. Kulig, J., Townshend, I., Edge, D., & Reimer, W. (2013). Impacts of wildfires: aftermath at individual and community levels? Australian Journal of Emergency Management, The, 28(3), 29-34.
6. Cross, N. R. (2019). Overlapping vulnerabilities: the impacts of climate change on humanitarian needs. Oslo: Norwegian Red Cross.
