INTRODUCTION: Use an attention-grabbing introduction that gives an overview of the topic and speaks to the specific sentiments or concerns of the audience you have chosen whilst also indicating your position
THESIS: Develop a clearly formulated, arguable thesis, including reasoning to support your position. In other words, your thesis should concisely give readers the reasons why your claim should be believed or why they should think/feel/act differently.
TOPIC SENTENCES: Each paragraph should begin with a clear and effective topic sentence that foregrounds for the reader what is discussed in the subsequent paragraph.
EFFECTIVE PARAGRAPHS: The paper must include ordered, developed, cohesive, and coherent paragraphs that develop the argument by offering evidence and explanation in support of your position. Every sentence should contribute to the argument of its paragraph and the paper as a whole. Make sure, too, that the logical relationship between sentences is always clear and that body paragraphs identify supporting reasons, ideas, or examples for the claim.
COUNTERARGUMENTS: The essay must present and then respond to one or more counterarguments to your claim.
CONCLUSION: End with a conclusion that emphasizes the importance of taking the action or making the change recommended by the claim.
ACADEMIC STYLE: The essay should follow coherent organization between and within paragraphs, maintain appropriate style and tone suited to the purpose and audience of the argument, adhere to proper, ethical, and correct documentation for ALL sources (sources that have been carefully evaluated, of course), and observe correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, and capitalization throughout
Requirements for the Final Draft
Maximum of 7 sources, including 4 scholarly sources, one primary source and one visual source.
Minimum 1,700 words
Correct MLA formatting
Correct MLA in-text citations
Correct MLA Works Cited
I wrote soemthing already and this is what i got back i just need it fixed please
The essay is a good explanatory essay; however, this assignment calls for argument. Without a debatble thesis, the essay falls short on the argument. MLA format is needed for in-text citation and Works Cited page.
