I want to rewrite my previous admission paper into one that answer those questions without the help of AI:
Applicants to the MS in Computer Science program should use the following outline to write their statement of purpose essay:
Introduction
Introduce yourself and give your general reasons for pursuing graduate study. Because our selection committee reads many applications, make your statement stand out by revealing your particular talents and individuality.
Qualifications
The aim of this section is to demonstrate that you have the necessary foundation and qualifications to be successful in this program. You should discuss:
Why you chose this field and what motivated you to pursue computer science.
Your expertise and accomplishments in your major field and any research you have performed. Mention projects and the names of professors who supervised your work.
Your undergraduate studies in mathematics, including calculus, discrete math, linear algebra, and numerical computations, and how they relate to what you intend to do in this graduate program.
Specific experiences that demonstrate your competence, motivation, and inspiration for continued study in computer architecture, operating systems, and networking; data structures and algorithm analysis; high-level programming languages (C and C++); computer graphics; and game software design and/or production.
Other relevant experiences (e.g. jobs, community activities, leadership in school organizations, awards, or honors). Include names of people, organizations, and other important details.
If necessary, briefly explain any discrepancies on your transcript, which might include a lower GPA in a particular semester or year.
Personal Background
Tell us about yourself. Describe your family and your community (or a community in which you once lived). You could include whether your family, a family member in particular, or someone in your community influenced your field of interest. Also, give examples of personal attributes or qualities that you know will help you successfully complete graduate study. For example, describe projects or work that exemplify your determination to achieve your goals, your initiative and ability to develop ideas, and your capacity to work through problems independently.
Conclusion
Provide a brief summary of why you are qualified to enroll in and will be successful in this graduate program.
