I needed to revise my outline a couple of times before I could move on to the essay. Below is the last critique the professor gave me before moving on. The essay is an arguementive one based off the thesis statement in the outline. It about the poem written by Edgar Allan Poe “the masque of the Red Death.” The poem is the only source needed.
HI
Mariyah,
This is pretty much there! The last sentence of the last bp – the
restated thesis – is missing the x – the first part about Prospero – so
you have to add that to that sentence to tie everything together.
Other than that, this is good to go, I approve the outline, but make
that one tweak to the outline and then write the essay from the outline.
When you write the essay, be sure to follow the instructions closely,
making sure to now have an original title for your essay, a full intro
paragraph with the thesis being one of the sentences in the intro, fully
developed analysis of the words in the quotes ( a few sentences on each
quote in which you break down the words in depth as opposed to the more
general things in the what I will say sections, integrate the quotes
into your own sentences, provide in-text parenthetical citations in MLA
style, a fully written conclusion, a works cited list at the end with
all the required bibliographical info about the story, and your matching
outline. If you make any further changes to the things contained on the
outline, make sure you make them on the outline as well as the outline
has to match the essay exactly. Use the outline to check your argument
once it is all done using the peer review questions.
Please text or email me with any questions you may have.
I needed to revise my outline a couple of times before I could move on to the es
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