Prompt: The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
I would like revisions to my essay that make it reveal good quality traits shine through. I mention focusing on what I can control and taking one step at a time. I would like good traits like these to be well reflected (shown not told) in my essay especially in the NFT application part. You can cut and edit any parts to make my essay more appealing to a college admissions officer.
Please read at least a few good college application essays to get a better understanding of this assignment: https://apply.jhu.edu/application-process/essays-that-worked/
(if this link doesn’t work, just search up good common app essays)
Also take a look at the example essay about mountaineering that i took inspiration from.