Hello,
I wrote this paper but my professor isn’t happy with it. I need help making small changes and most importantly providing proper references in AMA style. Can you parapharse what I have now. Please see attachment what she is looking for. That is my topic. Let me know if you have questions.
From my professor:
What I need to see is evidence that you have revised using the feedback you got from your peers and from me. As I said in my second email, what I’m seeing is exactly the same drafts you gave me the first time around. I think you may have relied on generative AI to help you write your papers, including the sources. I am ok with you having ChatGPT or another tool help you write. I am not ok with you not doing any revision based on the feedback you get and I’m not ok with you turning in what look like made up sources.
If you would like to work on revising your draft following the feedback that you got from me on the initial drafts, and then provide actual sources that you used (remembering to use AMA format to cite them), I will hold off on finalizing your grade until you get me that. If you get it to me by Tuesday at 5 pm, that will give me time to grade it before grades are due on Wednesday.
From my peer on my Introduction section of my paper:
Great job on your introduction regarding Keloids.
You provided a clear and concise description of what happens when a person’s skin keloids. It was also important to present the indirect effects of keloids, such as, the physical and mental areas of concern. I can thoroughly understand how the disfigurement of keloids in visual places on the body can cause emotional distress and lead to issues with one’s quality of life. I find it interesting that some people are more prone to have keloids than others. It is good that medical advancement has provided options besides surgery. There could be risk of recurrence after surgical excisions. Therefore the other methods of treatment can offer another way to address and manage keloidal scar tissue.
