Hello this will be my personal statement for my dental
school application I’m going to tell you what I want to write about and tell
you everything and you would just make sure it’s in the most professional way and
professional words and vocabulary please and make sure your words not
repetitive and it has to be 4500 characters MAXIMAM so please make sure it
doesn’t exceed that.
I want you start the
statement by this:
-At first I want to start with an interesting story to hook
the reader and it’s basically when I was
10 years old the dentist told me that my bottom jaw grows around 3x faster than
my upper jaw which makes my mouth has a weird bite and weird smile so I had to
put like something metal in my mouth and it had a key that pushes my upper jaw
every day until the age of 13. Plus, I had to put braces on to fix my gaps as
well,
– then I want to talk about how I was born in Egypt which is
a Muslim country and I’m Christian, there they don’t really like Christians and
we don’t have as much freedom at all like for women they have to go in street
with their hair and their body covered and they would prefer the Muslims over
Christians in anything and any job. So, when I turned 14 me my brother and my
parents immigrated to USA and we have been in Florida since then.
-then I want to talk about how when I came here I couldn’t
transfer all my credits from Egypt and I had to retake 7th in middle
school. So I felt a little behind and when I went to high school I took it only
in 3 years not 4 because I would take extra online classes every year to finish
early and graduate and then I went to saint Petersburg college for two years
and then I transferred to USF to take my bachelors from there.
-then I want to talk about why I chose dental, which is
basically two reasons, first it’s the story I said in the beginning and how I
would hate what happened to me to happen to anyone else and I would love to
help everyone and make sure everyone is good. Second reason is also the main
reason my parents moved to USA is me and my brother so we can have a better
education and better jobs and that made my parents come here and not work with
their certificates and just find any random jobs just for us to have a better
future so I’m working my hardest to do that for them and myself as well
-and then this section I want to talk about my faith and
church, I’m Coptic orthodox Christian and I go to a Coptic church here in
florida and I always attend liturgies and serve there, I have different
services one of them is Sunday school which I really enjoy because I love kids
and also I serve in the church sports days and that’s probably my favorite
service because sports and games are something I do more than 3 days a week and
enjoy playing and having fun with the kids at church as well.
– now this section I just want it to be short and simple I
just want to thank my parents and my older brother and give them credit for
basically helping me go through all this until right now and always being with
me and supporting me in every step
– and then please include a conclusion paragraph.
Note;
again please make sure this is as professional as possible, and feel free to put extra words or sentences as well as long as it doesn’t exceed the 4500 characters
