Finish writing this essay, i started already. add more words and more information to complete the essay. Follow the instructions below. Please do not make a mistake.
Make sure that the paper is set up fully in the correct MLA style and format per the instructions. Reread the instructions for more info. Watch this video for a reminder. That includes proper heading section on page 1, page number headers in the top-right of every page and double-spacing the entire paper. The most notable concerns is with the marginal width on the left side of every page.
Friendly reminder to all: For this essay, remove the excessive use of the first person (e.g., I, we, our, my, us) in your writing. Let’s see if you can get your writing to sound more objective in tone by removing them and using the third person solely (e.g., he, she, it, they, citizens, people).
Ensure that your essay meets the minimum word count requirement per the instructions, which requires a minimum of 1,500 words.
Avoid using the second person (e.g., you, your) unless it is contained in quotations.
Work on eliminating contractions (e.g., can’t, don’t) unless they are presented in quotes.
Intro: Good start. Work on incorporating a solid thesis. In argument research essays, some writers prefer to incorporate the verbs “should,” “must,” or “need” into the thesis; however, this is not a requirement. Remember to take a stance on your topic as well.
Body Paragraphs: The body paragraphs lack the required 3-5 sources incorporated via in-text citations. Most of your in-text citations are good. However, and just in case, watch this video from the respective module that teaches you how to incorporate the MLA in-text citations into your paper. Also, watch this video to learn how to create and format the full citation entries for the Works Cited page. Lastly, work on paraphrasing and summarizing ideas; don’t plagiarize. Only quote ideas when the original idea is so complex that transferring it to your own words would lose its meaning. Here’s the video again to help you understand how to paraphrase, summarize, or quote ideas (from module 4). Work on selecting sources that help you build a case for your argument. Refer to Module 4 again for how to access the college library system.
Friendly reminder: When you borrow quotes of four-plus lines, they must be set up in a specific way via block quoting. Watch this video for inspiration. Also, when you block quote, your comments about it must be extensive. Do not assume the reader understands the context of the original, extended quote.
Conclusion: Good closing! Well done.
The Works Cited page is incorrect in terms of alphabetizing and listing. Please learn to set this up correctly by watching this video.
Ensure that this product was not created using Artificial Intelligence.
Check for grammar to ensure that the final product is a polished one and to catch any minor errors.
