Deborah MerriamApr 3 2:04pm.Ashlee,
Thank you for submitting this assessment. You have made a good start with this analysis using a systems lens. Clearly identifying the strategic priorities will help you develop a balanced scorecard that addresses all four domains. If you have questions, please reach out. I would be happy to help. Please highlights any revisions in yellow when you resubmit.
Scoring Guide
Competency 1
Analyze organizational priorities at the system level.
Criterion
Analyze an organization’s strategic plan.
Your Result:BASIC
Describes an organization’s strategic plan.
Faculty Comments:You have given an overview of what Mayo Clinic values based on their organizational plan. Identifying the specific strategic priorities and then explaining (analyzing) their alignment with the mission and vision will raise this to a higher level of competency.
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Criterion
Evaluate the validity of data and analytical strategies used to develop organizational priorities.
Your Result:PROFICIENT
Evaluates the validity of data and analytical strategies used to develop organizational priorities.
Faculty Comments:The information you provide about analytical strategies is good. Please provide information about who sets the benchmarks. Then validate your organization’s benchmark currently in a specific example. For instance, regarding patient satisfaction, who says and to what degree should we aim to satisfy patients? To earn a higher proficiency level, you need to take authentic data and apply it to the organizational goals and expected outcomes identified as patient satisfaction. Comments must be referenced by using multiple citations.
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Criterion
Explain how input from stakeholders might have been elicited and incorporated into the development of strategic priorities.
Your Result:DISTINGUISHED
Explains how input from stakeholders is elicited and incorporated into the development of strategic priorities. Draws logically sound conclusions from a perceptive interpretation of relevant data and information or clear insight into prospective stakeholders.
Faculty Comments:You have described the process of obtaining internal and external feedback. To score a higher proficiency level, provide an example to illustrate an understanding of how to use authentic and real-world that leads to solutions. Also, please add references and citations that align with the information and the Strategic Plan.
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Criterion
Create a balanced scorecard for an organization.
Your Result:BASIC
Provides an overview of organizational priorities or a balanced scorecard favoring one or two domains.
Faculty Comments:You have begun developing a strategic plan for three of the four domains. The metrics that you have identified are excellent. What is your objective, metric, target number for each metric, and initiatives to help achieve the objective for each domain?
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Competency 5
Address assessment purpose in effective written or multimedia presentations, incorporating appropriate evidence and communicating in a form and style consistent with applicable professional and academic standards.
Criterion
Articulate meaning relevant to the main topic, scope, and purpose of the prompt.
Your Result:BASIC
Addresses a specific topic with unclear intent or insufficient depth.
Faculty Comments:You have begun analyzing a strategic plan for Mayo Clinic. The first step is to identify clear strategic priorities, which culminate in a balanced scorecard with specific objectives, metrics, targets, and initiatives for each domain. There’s always room for improvement in scholarly writing, and I hope you will consider using the resources on the left side of the course home page. In addition, here’s a link to the Capella Writing Center to learn more about scholarly writing: https://campus.capella.edu/web/writingcenter/home
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Criterion
Apply APA formatting to in-text citations and references.
Your Result:BASIC
Applies APA formatting to in-text citations and references incorrectly and/or inconsistently, detracting noticeably from good scholarship.
Faculty Comments:Please see the comments on the headings and the reference page. I hope you will use the supplemental resources link on the course room homepage to help you with formatting your reference list. Remember that APA requires that all factual information be cited to let your readers know where to go in case they want to read more about it. In addition, here’s a link to APA formatting that may be helpful: http://www.apastyle.org/learn/tutorials/basicstutorial.aspx
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Submitted Assessment
You should check two places for feedback from faculty: in the comments for each criterion above, and within the document itself, either as attached comments or within tracked changes.
Ashlee Thomas-BooneApr 1 7:21pm.I am retaking this course and have made changes to this assessment from previous attempts with another instructor I would like this assessment regraded please
