PLEASE- create operationalized variables – that we can identify and build the study around. As example, let’s imagine the research is saying depression is reflected by such women as hopelessness and anxiety as agitation. In this light, here is a refinement we can provide for accuracy:
The problem to be addressed by this study is the increase of hopelessness and agitation experiences among menopausal women (citations).
Following this example, we can see where the variables are clearer in terms of what is actually occurring. From this problem sentence, the Problem section would then be about demonstrating how hopelessness and agitation are experienced (specific forms it takes) for the population (one paragraph), and then the outcomes they are generating (negative consequences – second paragraph). So, consider what the specifics are of each, and let’s capture that more concisely in the sentence. I invite scheduling time, if not already, with me on Monday or Tuesday and we can review. I WILL INCLUDE/ATTACH MY PAPER THAT NEEDS THE ADDITIONAL MATERIAL IM REQUESTING TO BE COMPLETED. UTILIZING ONLY CITE/RESOURCES 5 Y/O ONLY.
