To receive a complete grade, you must have submitted:
• four short paragraphs of feedback (note: a paragraph consists of more than one sentence).
• two of the paragraphs should complete sentence stems under “commendations”.
• one of the paragraphs should complete a sentence stem under “recommendations”.
• one of the paragraphs should complete a sentence stem of choice from the ones listed in the
instructions.
• feedback about the student’s case study ideas/development, and not the presentation delivery.
In your feedback, you will choose four (4) sentence stems from the list below to complete and use as a guide for
your feedback. You must choose two (2) commendations and one (1) recommendation. The last sentence stem
can be chosen from any of those listed below. Each explanation should be a few sentences long, so that you
can adequately explain your thoughts. In the end, you will have 4 short paragraphs of feedback.
Commendations
You helped me really understand _____.
You effectively _______.
I like how you used evidence from ____ to show ____.
A strength I see in your case study is _____.
I like what you did with _____ because ______.
_____ is a good example of ______.
Recommendations
I would like to know more details about ______.
I didn’t understand what you meant when you discussed _____.
You might consider adding more information about ______. This will make your point about _____ clearer.
You did a good job explaining _______, and your explanation/evidence/claim about _____ could be stronger.
It wasn’t easy to follow your ideas about ______. Maybe you could add more details _____.
You might consider including some information about ______ to ______.
You might consider adding some evidence about _____ to support your claim about _______.
the link to the student’s presentation is:(if you cannot open it, contact me asap!)
https://echo360.ca/media/da068813-f025-4b68-8331-70b878abeaf6/public
i also uploaded some course materials in case u need them.
