After taking into consideration the feedback from your peers and your own self-evaluation, now is your opportunity to make the necessary changes to your speech, and submit a new and improved version that you are proud of.
Unlike the practice speeches which are graded on merely effort, this speech will be more harshly graded. Therefore, before submitting your speech make sure it is within the 6-8 minute safety zone, includes all 7 sources (correctly cited as well), follows the organizational model, etc. Note, you may not merely re-submit your first video. This should be the new and improved version. Failure to do so will result in a failing grade. And an irritated instructor. In an effort to deter you from doing so, you will have to submit the link to not only your Final Draft speech, but also repost the link to your practice speech.
The breakdown of the grade is Organization (30%), Content (30%), and Delivery (40%). You may want to look back over the feedback cheat sheets as a helpful guide under each of these areas.
Please submit your unlisted link to your improved speech below. Again, also include the link to your practice speech below it. Finally, include a bullet-point outline of your final draft sub-points. You will not need to re-submit your Works Cited page (unless you changed out some of the articles- in which case you can simply add the citation to the text of your sub
mission).
hoose California Wildfires topic
You
15 hours ago
examples of 7 sources
Content:
You indeed had all 7 sources, great job.
1st source- The daily beast May 2019. I was missing the day in the date, just be sure to cite the entire date.
2nd source- Wall Street Journal June 2018. Missing the day in the date.
3rd source- US Fed News Oct 2019. Missing the day in the date, and not cited until the very end- bump it up to the start of the supporting material.
4th source- Wall Street Journal June 2019. Missing the day in the date. Great citation. Clarifi
You
15 hours ago
4th source- Wall Street Journal June 2019. Missing the day in the date. Great citation. Clarified the importance of pesticides being harmful.
5th source- Targeted News service April 2019. Missing the day in the date. Sources 2-5 were all in the problems section- I would recommend spacing them out throughout the speech. Perhaps one source per subpoint to keep it balance?
6th source- Targeted News service May 2020. Missing the day in the date.
7th source- US News April 2018. Missing the day in th
7th source- US News April 2018. Missing the day in the date.
You
15 hours ago
I want words takes 7 to 8 minutes for taking video
You
15 hours ago
please read this note :
In this class you will include a minimum of 7 sources in your speeches. Just like a research paper for your writing professor, when you use evidence you will have to cite your sources. However, instead of an “in-text” citation for your paper, you will have an “in-speech” citation. This means, you will cite your sources out-loud throughout your speech. When citing your sources you will always include the name of the publication and the FULL date.
You
15 hours ago
for example :
Here is an example: “the Los Angeles Times reported on August 2nd, 2021 that communication is the number one skill that employers look for in future employees.”
