Please review and fix my presentation.
Presentation does not adequately identify two sources of data you might access to research your health problem or does not adequately explain why you would use the selected data in the audio narration.
Presentation does not adequately describe the incidence and prevalence of the health problem or behavior in your community based on the sources of data you identified or does not adequately explain the differences between incidence and prevalence in your audio narration.
Presentation does not adequately describe the levels of prevention as they relate to nursing practice for the health problem or behavior you selected in your community or does not adequately explain the levels of prevention and why you should think about all levels as a nurse leader in your audio narration.
Presentation does not adequately explain how you might integrate upstream thinking into your nursing practice to address the health problem or behavior you selected in your community or does not adequately explain upstream thinking in your audio narration.
Presentation does not adequately explain how the determinants of health help contribute to patient advocacy by nurses and healthcare professionals in relation to the health problem or behavior selected and in relation to your community or does not adequately explain the importance of understanding determinants of health in the audio narration.
Support presentations with references
Presentation does not adequately provide references to support the information.
Content contains significant spelling, punctuation, and/or grammar/syntax errors. Writing does not demonstrate adequate sentence and paragraph structure and requires additional editing/proofreading. Key sections of presented content lack clarity, logical flow, and/or organization.
Content minimally or does not demonstrate awareness of context, audience, and/or purpose. Writing is not reflective of professional/scholarly tone and/or is not free of bias. Style is inconsistent with the professional setting/workplace context and reflects the need for additional editing.
Content does not adequately reflect original writing and/or paraphrasing. Writing demonstrates inconsistent adherence to reference requirements, including the use of credible evidence to support a claim, with appropriate source attribution (when applicable) and reference. There are numerous and/or significant errors.
