This essay is suppose to have a structure argument style and also needs to include abstract thought. I would like to make the hook more interesting. As mentioned in the add on please include all sites used and have in text citation mla style.
Below is what i have completed so far:
Introduction
Hook: Freshwater resources lessen while the world’s population grows which creates a harsh reality that millions have to deal with. Safe drinking water access no longer remains certain.
: Freshwater scarcity threatens global public health as the lifeblood of communities. This crisis hits vulnerable regions hardest where people already struggle for clean water.
Background Information:: Worsening freshwater scarcity will endanger public health by increasing the spread of waterborne diseases, lowering standards of hygiene and sanitation, and worsening food insecurity.
Thesis statement: Implementation of a long-range water plan and sanitation infrastructure maintenance need to be integrated to address the problem for major city dwellers and maintain affordable access to safe potable water.
Roadmap: A long-range water plan may look like creating a comprehensive water management strategy, it includes conversating measures, Investments in upgrading infrastructure and community-led projects to tackle sanitation issues efficiently.
Body Paragraph 1
Statement: The increasing shortage of freshwater heightens the danger which includes waterborne illnesses. This poses a threat to health worldwide.
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Body Paragraph 2
Statement: The rapid growth of cities and industries puts strain on freshwater sources making water scarcity worse and adding to difficulties in distributing water.
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Body Paragraph 3
Statement: To address issues of freshwater availability different parties need to work together to invest in infrastructure, improve accessibility and enhance the quality of water resources.
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Conclusion
Restate your thesis from the introduction in different words:
Briefly summarize each main point found in the body of the paper (avoid going over 2 sentences for each point):
End with a strong clincher statement: an appropriate, meaningful final sentence that ties the whole point of the paper together (may refer back to the attention grabber):
try and include these websites:
https://www.populationmedia.org/the-latest/population-growth-and-water-scarcity
https://www.investopedia.com/articles/06/water.asp
https://www.canada.ca/en/environment-climate-change/services/water-overview/comprehensive-approach-clean.html
