Hello! Please follow the instuctions below to revise the paper that is attached. This is the insturctions for the whole paper and the paper is supposed to follow this. The topic of the paper is on youth unemployment.
Introduction (problem statement) (1-2 pages)
General topic introduced, defined.
Highlights the relevance of studying this topic
Facts, information, statistics supporting the inquiry into this general theme?
Eye-catching facts: present the problem in its essence.
End it with a clear statement of objective:
Present the study/ purpose OR your research question
Background (2-5 pages)
Write about the rationale of the project (elaborate on the pieces of information found in the intro)
Give the reader a good understanding of the research problem/ important historical facts about it. Presents the case.
Now please use these edits done by the professional to correct and adjust the paper as needed to make it better. Thank you and please feel free to ask me any questions if needed. 🙂
Very much essay like. Please use the examples I have given to review the writing style, the tone.
Structure the paragraphs, use the funnel approach.
See detailed comments. This needs very thorough revisions before it can be up to par with the graduate-level academic standards we will apply.
Follow directions issued in class. Review the written guidelines. Visit the LRC for editing strategies.
Most of the content needs to be entirely re-written, because it is essay-like, speech-like, vague and unsubstantiated.
Everything you write should add to the understanding of the reader.
The flow of ideas should be as follows;
In short, the introduction needs to be; shortened, less normative, present 1- the general problem 2- the gap 3- the objective (or RQ).
The background needs to be MUCH more obiectively (neutral) and present
definition for problem (expanded
history of problem
government initiatives to respond to the problem (with sources)
expanded descriptions of limitations in existing research
Continue structuring your ideas better. One thought per paragraph.
