Here is the link to the work-in-progress draft of the feature documentary I am currently in post-production on.
https://vimeo.com/koszulinski/map?share=copyLinks to an external site.
Password: Armstrong
SYNOPSIS:
Over the course of 34 days at sea deep in the arctic circle, the wages of knowledge are explored. The ship’s mariners and scientists reflect on their life at sea, as they attempt to gain a greater understanding of climate change both past and present.
For completion of this extra-credit assignment, an additional 2 pts will be added to your participation grade. This discussion thread is NOT REQUIRED, and will only add additional points to your participation grade.
After viewing the film, write a general response, and answer the following prompts. No word count requirements.
1. What is your general response to this current draft? Ideas, thoughts, potential revisions, etc.
2. What scenes could be removed without disrupting the flow of the film?
3. What scenes could be moved to an earlier or later point in the draft for added clarity and logical continuity (use general timecode to identify scenes)?
4. How would you situate this film in a film history context? For example, documentary/film movements or periods, specific films you’ve seen, etc? I’d be very interested in your historical framing of the film, with recommendations for additional films for me to review as I continue to edit this film.
