Topic#1. Respond to at least one of your classmates and discuss the effectiveness of her/his support. Here are a few things you might consider when writing your response:
Is the support relevant? Why or why not?
Are the facts verifiable? If so, how? If not, why not?
Are the opinions well-reasoned? If so, how? If not, why not?
What insight on facts and opinions have you gained from reading about your classmate’s post?
What insight might you offer your classmate regarding using facts and opinions to support ideas? Person I chose After the reading the assigned readings, in my opinion I believe that health and wealth go together. It seems like the best way to have good health insurance is to be wealthy. There are three classes of wealth the rich, middle class, and poor. While everything in the world cost money, the health of everyone shouldn’t cost money. I think healthiness of people is the most important thing, health care should be the same price for everyone.
Even though rich people have the money to buy the best health insurance they can find. It doesn’t mean they have a healthy lifestyle. I have meet many people that are rich and in the middle class. It seems like the middle class people live a healthier lifestyle, by going to the gym and eating right. I don’t agree with categories people with how much income they have or by their health. Everyone should be treated the same no matter if they are rich, middle class, or poor. Topic2. Review the original and revised sentence of at least one classmate and comment on the effectiveness of the revisions. Here are a few things you might consider when writing your response:
Do the revisions make the original sentence more concise? If so, how? If not, suggest an alternative revision.
Does the revised sentence accurately capture the meaning of the original sentence? If not, mention why and/or suggest an alternative revision.
What insight about concise writing have you gained by reviewing your classmate’s post?
What insight might you offer your classmate regarding concise writing? Person I chose : With technology improving at the rate it is work is becoming more dependent on electronics.
With technology improving rapidly, work is electronically dependent.
