hi, please answer the prompt with a “no” and make it look like a smart 10th grader wrote it.
the claim i wrote is “Though one person may be able to make a partial impact within a movement, given the relationship between power and freedom, it is safe to say that even with enough passion and determination, an individual cannot successfully oppose a human rights violation.” you can change it a little bit to make it sound a little better but not too much
please use at least one piece of evidence from each of the following sources:
jfk’s inaugural address
“the censors” by luisa valenzuela
Malala Yousafzai’s speech at United Nations
please include 4 paragraphs:
1 intro: 3-4 sentences, introduce the main argument, include claim, acknowledge both sides of argument, be clear, organize in this order:
claim
counterclaim
concession
refutation
assertion
2 Body : 12 sentences (minimum) each, organized in this order:
topic sentence:
introduce the main argument of the paragraph.
counterclaim:
1 concrete detail with citation, 2 commentary sentences
concession: admit something is true about the counter argument
claim(refuatation):
2 concrete details with citation
2 commentary sentences per quote
assertion: 1 sentence
explain the point
transition to next paragraph
1 conclusion: recap argument and reasons as well as claim. address the opposing side one more time and give a call to action at the very end.
please mess up a little bit so it shows that im not perfect
the two reasons i used were “an individual wont be able to do much against a government on their own” and “a single person is easy to kill, and their cause may die with them”. please use the first one, but feel free to change the other one if you deem necessary
please use each of the following words at least once:
relinquish
zenith
infallible
regress
proliferation
illicit
reminders from my teacher:
Double space your essay, size 12 Times New Roman Font.
Make sure each quote has a signal phrase at the beginning, and a citation at the end.
Make sure that each new paragraph is indented.
Make sure there are no “I,” “me,” “my,” “you,” or “your” statements in your writing.
Highlight your claim statement in your Intro paragraph.
please send it to me as a word doc if possible
thank you so much
