I submitted my research paper and I got a very bad feedback, which basically says the following:
1. My paper is lacking of sense and structure in the way of writing the arguments. The text is also redundant and too long
2. It is too much text for a Research Paper (It must be min. 5000+ words and min. 25+ references). Rewrite the Research Proposal in a concise and structured form, not more than 5100 words, but everything should be inside and connected in a relevant and coherent form.
3. My research question is weak and the literature is not helping to understand the concepts, lacking for connection.
4. Many of my references are old, it should be from 2015 onwards, since it is a modern topic (digitalization).
5. I have many subtitles in the 2. Theory part, there should be maximum 4 subtitles (2.1., 2.2, etc), the current titles should be rework and they should be shorter with valuable information and rich in literature from journals (at least 15 journals). Also, there was a strong misunderstanding of words, due to many terms that are not correlated, it should be focused to the research question.
6. The 1. Problem of Statement should have just one subtitle, which should be 1.1. Research Gap. 5. My methodology is too complex to understand and lacking of conciseness. Furthermore, the methodology is to repetitive and redundant.
7. Some literature is marked in the Bibliography, because it was relevant and interesting to the lecturer. Nevertheless, it can be deleted if not necessary.
8. The Methodolody says many processes, it should keep it simpler with a Qualitative approach and interviews semi-structured, delete the structured part and clean the text regarding methodology.
9. The marked (with yellow) literature from the Bibliography, is the most relevant from the whole list; but it can be deleted if it is not useful anymore.
Please use the pdf as a reference but consider the comments.
