I have the essay written it just needs to be rewritten using the corrections attached that are by my professor. The essay needs to be rewritten a lot because right now it doesn’t follow what my professor is asking.
I attached the essay and the annotated bibliography because two of my sources need changing.
Four-five (4-5) pages. You must get to the bottom of the fourth page at the minimum. 1) Choose a social media platform or app you use on a regular basis to evaluate; I chose FitOn a workout app I use. 2) Establish three clear criteria for evaluating this platform or app; 3) Evaluate how the platform or app has impacted your life using your three criteria; 4) Support your evaluation with explanations, details, and examples; 5) Come to an overall conclusion or judgment about the platform’s or app’s impact on your life; 6) Integrate information from at least three (3) credible researched sources into the arguments. PLEASE NOTE: DO NOT confuse the social media platform with the app. For example, if you use Instagram or Snapchat on a regular basis from your phone, you will be evaluating Instagram or Snapchat and not the app. An introduction that follows the upside-down triangle structure we have been using this semester. The establishment and explanation of three (3) clear and distinct criteria by which to evaluate the social media platform or app you have chosen. Three (3) arguments that evaluate your experiences with the platform or app and how it has impacted your life using these criteria. Explanations, details, and examples that develop each evaluative criterium. The use of three (3) credible researched sources as support. At least three (3) correctly cited and documented direct quotations. This means at least one (1) quotation each from the credible researched sources. A conclusion that comes to a final decision or judgment based on the evaluation presented. An MLA formatted works cited page.
