PROFESSORS FEED BACK : Excellent job selecting resources from multiple disciplines and summarizing the content – (need the rest of those sources though and the proper citations for them). I look forward to seeing how this develops into your final project. (You’ll need to organize the narrative to support your thesis (so by ideas not sources) and then cite all the experts and research that support those ideas). It won’t read like an annotated bibliography in that section when you are finished – it will be an organized narrative that contains (in-text citations throughout.)
Please make it better if you can
thesis statement : Studying how business ethics, social responsibility, and how they affect a company’s reputation and customer loyalty shows that being ethical and getting involved in social issues makes a company’s brand look better and helps people trust the company more. This makes customers more loyal and helps the company stay successful.
PROFESSOR FEED BACK FROM THESIS STATEMENT:This is a good thesis statement, but the writing does not really flow – look at rewording it so it comes out more smoothly for your final paper.
Add references that i ahve on my draft.
