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Review commentary from my First draft of my essay and make the necessary changes. Page must remain within the 5000 word criteria.
The final draft should be a revision of the entire paper. You must include a research memo to let me know how you addressed the comments/suggestions in the first draft of the paper. Please include the research memo as a separate document. I will read your research memo alongside your final draft to determine your grade.
I.E- Hello Dr. Grant, I am addressing your commentary from my first draft…etc
Should states be allowed to prevent former president Donald Trump from being listed as a candidate on Republican Party primary ballots?
Use information and discussions from class to determine which issues are most important to answer this question. Be sure to describe each issue thoroughly. Please also be certain to provide your own analysis (your analysis will be critical to earning a high grade).
Your paper should meet the following formative guidelines:
Paper must be submitted in MS Word
5000 words
11 or 12 point font, in Aptos or Times New Roman
One inch margins
Double Spaced
Use APA Citation
Additionally, students must:
Write a memo describing the changes they made to their paper. It will not be possible to get a passing grade on the paper without completing said memo.
The memo must address each comment in Canvas—both those that are directly on the paper and those that are listed in the comments section.
The memo must be uploaded to Canvas when students uploads their final papers.
Revise the first draft of their paper using track-changes in MS word. I will not read/grade papers that do not include track changes.
Students must submit the paper allowing the track changes to be visible by the instructor.
This will allow me to follow along with your changes as you made them.
Based on the paper a research presentation must be created with notes of a script on what to say during narration of 10 minute presentation
Research Presentations
1. be a powerpoint
2. narrated powerpoint (voice over) – Provide a script for the voiceover
3. “should not be able to live without you” need to able to expand further than what’s on the slide
4. logical/ clear order (address sections of paper— intro- at least 3 parts-conclusion)
5. as many slides as you want
6. no new research included
9. time limit: 5 min max., 3 min min.
Files have been uploaded with commentary absed on my paper as well as below is some comments the professor left:
Files included with readings during class please only use and reference the reading from the course ONLY
https://avalon.law.yale.edu/18th_century/fed59.asp
https://www.archives.gov/founding-docs/constitution-transcript
https://www.washingtonpost.com/nation/interactive/2021/capitol-insurrection-visual-timeline/?itid=lb_complete-coverage-pro-trump-mob-storms-capitol-building_8
https://crsreports.congress.gov/product/pdf/LSB/LSB10569
https://www.wsj.com/video/trump-full-speech-at-dc-rally-on-jan-6/E4E7BBBF-23B1-4401-ADCE-7D4432D07030
Comments from Outline:
This is very well organized. Please be sure to cite to some academic sources in your paper. Please also be sure to state your argument clearly in the introduction.
COmments from first draft:
I have been unable to find your argument.
This paper is well written and well organized. However, as far as I can tell, it does not respond to the feedback from the outline assignment that you need an argument. More so that wanting to see if you can discuss an issue over the course of 5K words, I wanted to see if you could take a position and use discussions, class readings, or other scholarly work to buttress your position, As far as I can tell, you did not do that.
