Abstract: make the abstract short and to the point
Introduction:
Merge Introduction with background and make it a little shorter and to the point
Research question: reflect on research questions it should be answered through your findings and analysis, if all of them are not needed maybe omit them or change them
Literature review: analyze it better and deeper Add theoretical framework
Methodology: who are your participants and why you selected them
Ethical consideration: Consider the ethical aspect of the thesis, and the research
Findings : what makes the story of your participants unique, what is the aspect is it society, religion or culture, look from a different point of view (age, gender, ethnicity, what makes it unique), what changes the dynamics, make it specific to the Afghan women, it should not be general,
Analysis: analyze each theme separately relate it to theoretical framework, and then combine all the themes on wider spectrum what did you analyze how it connects to various aspect of Afghanistan and makes it unique to Afghanistan
Conclusion: Rewrite the conclusion based on everything has been discussed and suggest any future further research Put more point on National solidarity program Focus on Conflict affected areas Religious and ethnic Analyze concrete reasons and feelings Their interactions with other people Hear Voices of your respondents Theory doesn’t make sense (broad, how does it work in your thesis) More specific finding Interesting cultural patterns and model in the afghan context
Lastly, Put more point on National solidarity program Focus on Conflict affected areas Religious and ethnic Analyze concrete reasons and feelings Their interactions with other people Hear Voices of your respondents Theory doesn’t make sense (broad, how does it work in your thesis) More specific finding Interesting cultural patterns and model in the afghan context
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