Thank you for the last order. Please revise this draft and lengthen it with additional sources. I hope the attached file is the root of the new essay. (It is a little revised – just several words- from your original one.)
These are the instructions.
1. (I hope not to change the first paragraph, especially thesis.) Try to connect every paragraphs with the thesis.
2. Include at least 2 outside source to make a case for the story’s narrative significance to the larger literary world.
3. Your research should be from a credible, academic source that you can use as evidence to advance your argument.
4. Your sources should not take more than two paragraphs. Make sure that interpretation and analysis follows after you quote the research.
5. It will be graded based on the precision, focus, and persuasive strength of your explication (so you will need to focus on the traditional building blocks of the essay: thesis, topic sentences, unity + coherence, evidence + analysis, & meaningful conclusion).
