Hello, I am attaching the paper I turned in, and the notes the teacher sent for corrections. The following were the original instructions:Describing the AggregateIn a Microsoft Word document of 3-4 pages formatted in APA style, you will submit your final description of the aggregate and community in which the aggregate is located, based on feedback from your instructor on your Week 1 paper and your continued work. Please note that the title and reference pages should not be included in the total page count of your paper.
Describe the AggregateBegin the assignment by describing your aggregate. Include the following information:Name of the aggregate
Geographical location and size
A brief history
Basic vital statistics
Crude birth rate, infant mortality rate, life expectancy, leading causes of death, and any other relevant statistical information related to the health of the aggregate from the windshield survey.
Explain, giving at least two reasons, why you selected this particular aggregate for your Capstone project.
Windshield SurveyWith the use of public transportation or by driving a vehicle around the community, you can assess the common characteristics of the community of your selected aggregate.Key observations to make during your windshield survey include the following:Age and condition of the homes in the community
Location and condition of parks and other recreational areas
Amount of space between homes and businesses
Transportation in the community
Quality of streets and sidewalks
Types/numbers of stores and other businesses
People out in the community
Cleanliness of the community
Billboards or other media displays
Places of worship
Availability of services—doctor, dentist, social centers, recreation centers, hospital
On a separate references page, cite all sources using APA format. Helpful APA guides and resources are available in the South University Online Library. Below are guides that are located in the library and can be accessed and downloaded via the South University Online Citation Resources: APA Style page.
The American Psychological Association website also provides detailed guidance on formatting, citations, and references at APA Style. APA Citation Helper
• APA Citations Quick Sheet
• APA-Style Formatting Guidelines for a Written Essay
• Basic Essay Template
Submission Details:Name your document SU_NSG4076_W2_Project_LastName_FirstInitial.doc.
Submit your Microsoft Word document to the Submissions Area by the due date assigned.
Requirements: 3-4 pages